Sunday, August 7, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

 Happy Six Sentence Sunday! Got some exciting news to share, one of my short stories, The Ranking is a bestseller on ARe! Wahoo! Got a new short, erotic futuristic, BDSM five flame scorcher for you to sample based in the same futuristic world. Enjoy!


 Footsteps seemed in sync with her heartbeat, a sharp click accompanying every thud against her ribcage. His massive frame filled the doorway, his features cloaked in shadow. Dressed in tailored charcoal slacks and a cobalt blue shirt, he carried a large bag, which he set down inside the door. He straightened and shut the door behind him. Though it was forbidden to address him first, Abby couldn’t help herself. It had been too long.

21 comments:

  1. "Though it was forbidden to address him first, Abby couldn’t help herself. It had been too long." Woot! Nicely done!

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  2. Intriguing snippet. Where's this sexy mister been? Great six!

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  3. Excellent description, followed by the intriguing last couple of sentences. Want to read more of this.

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  4. Fantastic description, and the pace was wicked. Perfect to create the intrigue of whats going to happen now she has addressed him. Well done. I loved it.

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  5. Great description and intriguing setup!

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  6. Very intriguing, and well done on the Bestseller!

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  7. Whats he going to do to her for the transgression?

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  8. Loved the description and leave me wanting more.

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  9. Oh my. Large bag = anticipation and more than a little bit of trepidation.

    And, congrats on the bestseller story.

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  10. Mmm yummy! Wonder what's in the bag? Nice 6!

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  11. Great descriptions combined with anticipation!

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  12. Love the anticipation you left her and us with

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  13. Like the increasing tension here.

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  14. What's in the bag and what's he going to do to her for breaking the rules? Very steamy set-up here.

    Also - I love your banner, that is gorgeous!

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  15. Took my breath away. So compelling!

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  16. And her punishment for speaking out of turn is... Can't wait to find out! Nice six!

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  17. Somebody's gonna get herself in trouble...

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  18. Uhoh. She will pay for it, I bet...and love every minute of it.

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