Sunday, August 14, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday No Limits


New cover, new six from No Limits. Click the cover to preorder from Amazon!

Rhys let his conscious mind drift, so not to dwell on the 

discomfort. Even though his body was trapped light years away,

twinges from his physical self produced a phantom pain that 

resounded in his empathic essence.
            How long had it been? With no way to mark the passage of time, he couldn’t even begin to guess. He missed the vivid colors of fresh green and growing things, the salty taste of the stew his brothers had eaten nightly, the coarse textures of the robes they wore while in training. Other sensations seemed even dimmer, barely within his grasp.

7 comments:

  1. A very enticing excerpt! And I love the cover!

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  2. Vivid six! Love how the reader is pulled into his world.

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  3. Great description and interesting baseline for his perceptions. Very different.

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  4. I was drifting with him by the end of the six. Great structure pulling me into his half world.

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  5. I want to know more. . .great job pulling me in.

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