Saturday, April 23, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday



Nothing says Easter like a little post apocalyptic Sci-fi romance, eh?  


From The B Cubed Trilogy Book 2: Bred


Isaac opened his mouth to respond but the pounding of hoof beats overpowered the stillness of the night. The two breds turned to see a host of mounted men swarming around a gleaming white carriage. As was customary, both breds fell to their bellies making themselves as unobtrusive as possible so no fine born lady would be forced to look upon them.
  
“You two there,” one of the riders called out. “Rise to your knees!”
Rothguard and Isaac exchanged worried glances at the unusual command.

19 comments:

  1. Your world pulls me in deeper with each one of your sentences. I like this very much! Happy Easter.

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  2. Great insight into your world. Definite intrigue with the last line.

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  3. Awesome world building. Incredibly well done.

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  4. That's really cool! You gave us a great insight into the society in just six simple sentences :D

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  5. Well done! You told me so much about the world you've built in those sentences.

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  6. What an interesting world you've built. Can't wait to read more!

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  7. Busted! Very cool snippet. Hope to read more!

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  8. Oooh, love it! I'm totally intrigued. Is this a WIP? I definitely want to read more.

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  9. Love the snippet. Looks like somethings about to happen

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  10. Yes, very nice world building. Congrats on a great six!

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  11. LOL I have to agree with Cate. My first thought was "busted!" lol.

    Best,
    Allure Van Sanz

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  12. I like what this says about the characters' world. Good six!

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  13. Well done. You conveyed a lot of info in 6 sentences. I want to know more.

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  14. YES, I love this world and the characters. More, more, more!

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  15. Very descriptive! Can't wait for what's next!

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  16. Some nice world building there.

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