Sunday, May 8, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Fresh off the presses, this is from my latest WIP NO MERCY. Zan the Space Pirate has gotten himself into a sticky situation. Though Gia can't stand him she's agreed to help him out of his predicament. And his pants.

“Look all you want, I ain’t exactly shy.”
            Since he’d offered, Gia raised her gaze. She’d pretty much nailed it by calling him big man. He didn’t just have a trouser snake, he’d captured the mother anaconda. “Really? This situation does it for you?”
He had the audacity to shrug. “Men are easy.”
Posted by Jenna McCormick at 1:26 AM
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18 comments:

  1. Jessica E. SubjectMay 8, 2011 at 4:14 AM

    Oh, I love this! :D

    The character's personalities come through so well in this excerpt. You definitely caught my attention with the first line.

    I love your blog header too!

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  2. UnknownMay 8, 2011 at 4:26 AM

    Ha, brilliant! 'Mother Anaconda', lol. Great six!

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  3. Gem SivadMay 8, 2011 at 5:19 AM

    Oh, I want to meet these two. That was such a great scene. I can SEE it. Wonderful dialog, wonderful six!

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  4. Marie DeesMay 8, 2011 at 6:25 AM

    LoL, I love that exchange!

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  5. Taryn KincaidMay 8, 2011 at 7:05 AM

    Great banter. Great characters. Men are easy! Lots of fun!

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  6. Sandra SookooMay 8, 2011 at 7:15 AM

    lol Oh this is an awesome snippet!

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  7. Rebecca RoyceMay 8, 2011 at 8:24 AM

    LOL! That is awesome.

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  8. Carolyn RosewoodMay 8, 2011 at 8:53 AM

    Absolutely wonderful!

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  9. Kim KnoxMay 8, 2011 at 9:30 AM

    lmao, love it! Great dialogue.

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  10. Vegetarian CannibalMay 8, 2011 at 9:53 AM

    Men ARE easy, lol! Great six! Love the chemistry between these characters.

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  11. Cate MastersMay 8, 2011 at 11:40 AM

    Fun snippet! Loved it. Yep, at least he's honest, lol

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  12. LindsayMay 8, 2011 at 2:49 PM

    Men may be easy. They may be cheap. But their not cheap and easy. Well, some might be.
    Love the six

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  13. J.A. BeardMay 8, 2011 at 2:55 PM

    'Mother anaconda' made me laugh aloud.

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  14. Lynne MurrayMay 8, 2011 at 3:13 PM

    Uh-oh, anaconda rising, look out! Sexy but funny six--a great combination.

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  15. Sandra NachlingerMay 8, 2011 at 5:47 PM

    Mother Anaconda? Too sweet! I love the crisp dialog.

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  16. Monica Enderle PierceMay 8, 2011 at 9:36 PM

    LOL! At least she knows where he, um, stands....

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  17. UnknownMay 9, 2011 at 3:09 PM

    LOL. Ah, now, of course, I'm curious as to just what sort of sticky situation they've gotten themselves into.

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  18. Jayel KayeMay 10, 2011 at 5:41 AM

    Anaconda! Brilliant

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