Usually, I float over the scorched landscape, the one great supercontinent surrounded by the two polar oceans. I see the piles of bleached bones on the light side, they span for miles, stretching back through time. Then, I find the survivors. They live in small clusters, the born colonies as they call themselves. They are the descendants of those that did believe the prophesy and went deep underground. The bred do all the work though, people grown like crops.
Interesting Six! I'm very curious about this world...
ReplyDeleteNice introduction to the 'world' involved in the story. I look forward to reading more. :)
ReplyDeleteVery intriguing world you're building. I look forward to reading more!
ReplyDeleteWow.
ReplyDeleteOpens up a ton of questions. I can feelthe desolation and would need to read more.
These six really draw you in and paint a dark picture.
Wow, intriguing worldbuilding. And very visual.
ReplyDeleteI agree, intriguing!
ReplyDeleteYes, I'm uneasy when I read the description of the "bred". World building at its best. I'm hooked!
ReplyDeletenice six. very descriptive.
ReplyDeleteExcellent teaser, and great description. Would love to read more!
ReplyDeletePulled me right in. I'm very curious to read the history of this world.
ReplyDeleteWhat a desolate yet interesting idea
ReplyDeleteFascinating. Great setup. I want to know more.
ReplyDeleteInteresting worldbuilding. Like how you have her floating above so she can take in her surrounds
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone! I absolutely love this world and the poor creatures who dwell within.
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